New Scene, Half a Chapter
Chapter 5 of NIGHTCRAFT MOTHER started with a boring blurt of exposition. This has been eliminated and replaced with an actual scene, with dialogue and description, and even a little tension.
You know, like books are *supposed* to be. The reader is supposed to get, you know, *pleasure* from reading. I get it, I do.
Eventually.
That, plus editing about half of (the remaining bits of) chapter 5, plus various and asundrous other things, and now it’s after 9:00 and I am bleary with the exhaustion.
So, without further ado: good night, all!